Are these ok ?

[Candle]

Looking at maybe using something like this for my new game .

[Murder House]

That door on the right is really artistic and brings life to the whole scene. :rolleyes:  

[Candle]

Well i plan on adding more things to the scene like trash, things like that . but you think it is ok then ?  

[Murder House]

Well i plan on adding more things to the scene like trash, things like that . but you think it is ok then ?

Well, to be honest, I do think it is a bit dull at the moment, excluding the door on the right and the clouds, but if you even added something like a trashcan or even some trash along the street, I think it would look alot better. But if you were looking for the cold and deserted look, you're there!

[Candle]

Yes I'm adding more stuff . just wanted to get a feel of the buildings and what people though of them . I just don't draw well.  

[Murder House]

Yes I'm adding more stuff . just wanted to get a feel of the buildings and what people though of them . I just don't draw well.

Yeah, that makes two of us. All the scene needs is a bit more detail somehow and then it will be great.  

[Candle]

Here is one with more done to it .

[Murder House]

Much better, I like this one, especially the phone and the door.  

[DCW]

I really like the screenshots. Remember that a lot of people aren't the greatest artists around, but that doesn't mean the game won't be enjoyable. Look at the Larry Vales or Rob Blanc games for example. The graphics are mediocre, but the games are VERY popular because of other things, like story and humour.

I wouldnt worry too much about it    

[Candle]

Thanks for the kind works guys , I'll try to do my best as thats all a person can do .  

[Murder House]

I really like the screenshots. Remember that a lot of people aren't the greatest artists around, but that doesn't mean the game won't be enjoyable. Look at the Larry Vales or Rob Blanc games for example. The graphics are mediocre, but the games are VERY popular because of other things, like story and humour.

I wouldnt worry too much about it 

You are absolutely right DCW, I mean, even if a games graphics and artwork are absolutely horrible and repulsive to look at (no, not yours candle) but it has a great storyline and plot etc, and it is enjoyable, then it should be considered a good game and one I would like to play (yes, yours Candle). :lol:

[deadworm222]

And even if a game is aesthetically bad, it can still be well directed.

[Murder House]

And even if a game is aesthetically bad, it can still be well directed.

And even if the story, plot, graphics, artwork and directing are bad then the... OH GOD, SAVE US ALL!!!

[Candle]

Well I hope this one turns out ok .. lol
Looking at my Deveron Murder Mystery Game , I have over 3000 downloads of it and that was my first game .. and I think not all that good.